So Recently my mate deustriplo came to me and pointed out some stuff regarding The Four Horses
so today i'll try and revisit and change some topics as well as making some lore for me and my army
firstly the part about joining us or perish... deustriplo has pointed out the similarities between my army and his in this part and i agree usually pirates or evil organizations recruit from prisoners or poorly treated citizens this i'll change to being strictly isolated so in other words we won't spare anyone so while the armada recruits we are more like the Brotherhood Of Steel from fallout so in other words its all family based. another possibility ive considered is making my army out of korvax clones so rather than people its just me and my robot army
rather than taking valuables we survive off of our own technology so we essentially take from our planets. this in turn stops my idea of destroying the galaxy... besides the galaxy in the RP is essentially a battleground and we have nothing to prove our victory if its destroyed major N00B move there... *facepalm
now i made a point about taking the atlas fragments for my army in the RP. now i'm not a story writer and i don't think i was thinking right at this part so i will edit it so ignore this if its gone by the time you see. deustriplo has also pointed out that I've declared all the other factions as enemies. once again i wasn't thinking right at this part. i will change it to "We are isolated and any sign of stopping us will be seen as an act of hostility you may not join The Four Horses you may well want to stand back and let us get free of this galaxy"
right now that all mistakes, similarities and contradictions have been cleared up i will now work on some lore you can expect to see that some time soon
PS: i've got alot of school work to finish as well since its literally the last 7 or so weeks so if i'm not online i'm most likely busy.
"Just stay where you are and let your fear subside. Just stay where you are if there's nothing to hide" -Rob Swire (watercolour) Pendulum